This is a sweet piece.
As long as you're right next to me,
I will forever be...
Happy.
^^
That's what love is all about :)
Em

Sweet, amazing. Like your rhymes.

Fredy,

I like this composition... The rhyming was unforced and while reading this I nod along and the bottom lines made me said: "uhhhhh.. so sweet"...

As long as you promise my heart to mend.
I'll promise you:
If you carry the sky then I'll carry you"

the weight dropped to the floor,
The sky was falling, and I care no more.

As long as you're right next to me,
I will forever be...
Happy.
^^
favorite lines
5/5

Gel