by Ingrid
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Well worded, Michael, and my sentiments exactly! |
by Ben Pickard
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Another excellent senryu, Michael - you have hit a real purple patch with them recently. |
by Brenda
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Michael, I normally don't get involved with politics but this is really good and very telling. |
by Em
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Micheal |
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When it comes to politics I prefer to hold my peace. You did an excellent job with this write. So much said in a few words. Take care |
by Maple Tree
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I hope not............ I personally am embarrassed that man is running. |
by Hellon
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I know you're a bit of a rebel with syllable count so I'm not sure if I should mention that I think you have 6 syllables in line one? |
by Mr. Darcy
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Thank you Hellon, |
by Hellon
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No..you are correct, of course soiled has only one syllable...with my accent I say soy-eld and..knowing your somewhat rebellious nature towards syllable count you just threw me slightly :) |
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Lot of emotion and visuals in a small box |