Comments : Desire

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Jason and welcome to the site.

    It's funny, growing up I read a lot of the romantic poets like Wordsworth and I can't help feeling there just isn't enough romantic, rhyming love poetry around these days. Thank you for supplying some.
    Great piece and keep writing,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Jason

      Thank you Ben! This is one of the few poems that I've written that I tried to have a rhyming pattern to it, as I've become more adapted to free-style writing now. I will definitely take your comment to heart and work on pursuing more poems like this and follow a rhyming scheme.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lyn Aribaca

    Really nice poem

  • 7 years ago

    by Lyn Aribaca

    Hello dear ..

    all I can say is. just keep writing. this one is very unique. the words, style, the flow I really appreciate.

    vote for this

    lyn

    • 7 years ago

      by Jason

      Thanks dear, much appreciated :)