Comments : You Told Me To Be Happy

  • 7 years ago

    by Randhir kaur

    Her wails carried on
    Like the most sorrowful song,
    Nice write..enjoyed it..keep up..

    • 7 years ago

      by Jason

      Thanks Randhir!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lyn Aribaca

    This is very good composition.
    I like the way how you open the flow, and that was smooth..

    for that I will be able to read another write of urs

    2 words for you
    good job

    godbless.
    lyn

    • 7 years ago

      by Jason

      I appreciate all your comments Lyn. Thank you again :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Jason, this is so so sad but so beautifully written. The story you tell of such heartache is one that many can relate to and so often it ends in disaster.

    Great write,
    all the best, Em