Comments : Dark lullaby

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    Dang. I wish I had more votes left! I love dark and I love this. Chilling, the more I read it.

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Rsan

    A lovely dark imagery filled piece

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Maher, you have excelled yourself again.

    Such a short shocking piece that probably happens each day to many homeless people. A fantastically gripping write and penned well.

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Em, always a pleasure to know you enjoy what I put up here :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,
    I love how this is written to the tune of 'rock a bye baby' the lullaby is a dark one and sounds good. I should know I've just sung it to my cat.

    The cat ran away ....

    ....Tiddles?

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      LOL thank you for reading, good sir, but I take no responsibility for the cat!

  • 7 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    Sent a not so subtle chill down my spine! There's a level of truth to this, which made it even more chilling. Good work!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you sir!