Comments : A clear message (syntuit)

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Michael

    I absolutely agree with this. Make mistakes, be hurt, get angry, feel envy - spill oceans of tears because of those feelings, but make sure you learn from them and be a stronger person 'for life'

    All the very best,

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, I love the message in this.

    We have to live and learn from our mistakes but what we need to so is learn to pick ourselves up and brush ourselves off when bas things happen.


  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Michael another great poem. I echo what's already been said. Once a lesson through tears has been learnt carry it with you for life. Its just sad that sometimes you have to be reduced to tears to realise what the lesson is.

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wonderfully stated in such a beautiful format. Well done!

  • 4 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Beautiful write with a lot of truth, everyone else pretty much said what I wanted to. Really love the message in this.

  • 4 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hello! Sir

    Marvelous inspirational stuff.

    What a fine feature of writing you have. I wonder how splendidly you have described the message.

    These three lines will lift the people who give up very easily. This work reminds me of the great man 'Robin Sharma'. Many people like reading his books World Wide.

    This is a just (Perfect) work. Well done! Super 5.

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Hello Michael,

    Three little lines holding great wisdom.
    Each tear that has been shedded has a story to tell. You would think that we learn from the first time sadly sometimes it is like a cycle repeating itself. I have often wondered what does it take to finally learn but it takes others longer to finally see the light. Beautiful write and thank you for sharing. All the best.

  • 4 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Truer words would have to be lived, not spoken.

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is so true Michael and you would hope that after the first time we learned our lesson. Sadly and often we keep on repeating until finally we learn. Enjoyed reading and add to my favorite. Take care