So called nature.

by Tinashe Mafura   May 13, 2016


In a couple minutes of silence, gusty winds
blew from north to the southern side of
my palace.
And a thunderous sound came out from the
sky.
Birds flying into the air expressing their true
colours of happiness, witnessing the goodness
of the so called nature.
Dark clouds accumulated up in the sky and I knew
that they were the so called cumulonimbus clouds.
Trees bending sideways like madmen chasing nothing.
Leaves falling and some water droplets falling too.
Bats flying in the air and some doves chirping.
All in one was and is still the greatness of God
who created the so called nature.
As the amount of water droplets increases on the
ground, some started flowing into the gullies.
Rivers flooding. Fountains liberating mist into
the atmosphere.
Not forgeting the dams and rocks,
it's all manna from heaven.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Tinashe Mafura

    Thanks Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Such an image packed piece. A wonderful write and a joy to read. Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Tinashe Mafura

    Thank you Black for your comment and your suggestions are almost good.

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Seems like you have studied the nature very well.

    Your expression and the flow of this poem is very nice. It's a part of your imaginary mind.

    But I have got to say that this write would have been much more better if you would have shortened this.

    Correction in the second last line.
    Spelling - Forgetting.

    Over all it's a good write. Keep on going. 5/5

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