Comments : Society's Lie

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Rolo

    "Thank you for reading, this is my first poem in yeas"

    ^^

    As to that, firstly, the pleasure was all mine and secondly, you should write more!
    This is a very smooth and well written piece with an entirely important theme, especially considering this warped time we live in.

    Take care and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by Judy Sullivan

    Why Rolo, is this your first post? I really enjoyed your poem & would love to read more of them. It's all so very true & sad that this world has come to that. Keep writing more Rolo. Looking forward to reading more from you...

  • 4 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    It is absolutely wonderful to see you write a poem again. It's been a long time since I have seen a poem from the people who were so dear to me here, in my adolescence. Perhaps you do not remember me, which is fine, my username has changed since than. Once upon a time I was Tainted Miko, and it was a joy to call you my friend.

    It appreciate your poem - it gave words to some of the utter hopelessness I feel about the political and economic situation in the United States. You ended the poem with hope, and I think I needed to be called to have more of it.

    • 4 years ago

      by Rolo

      Thank you, I very much appreciate that! I remember the username, for sure. This site was definitely a big part of helping me (and others) get through some rough times. For that, I am eternally grateful.

  • 3 years ago

    by Alec

    Ive been going through a lot of your old work after having read this, and I think I speak for more than myself when I say this so... please keep writing.

    • 2 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I agree 100 percent...this site misses you badly...