Hello,

It is so sad to find this poem without a vote or comment.

Wondering who would care or notice if ones life was taken is not uncommon, especially if life is emotionally hard. Usually we have close friends and family to turn to, but here there seems to be no one.

As writers we have a wonderful outlet that allows us a portal for our thoughts.

Well done for getting this feeling out.

Take care,

Michael

As Mr Darcy says, it is sad to see an important piece like this that has gone under the radar.
So many times, we feel like this and put on a show for people who just don't understand what we really feel like. Sometimes, it's because they just don't have the time but often, it's because they just don't want to see the truth.

Take care,

Ben

Hi,

I hope we're not too late... You don't have any Idea how wonderful life is.
If your family telling you bad things it doesn't mean that they don't like you. maybe it's just their way to push you to become a better person.. communicate with them, maybe you got them the wrong way (misinterpret)..tell them your feelings, and the words they used hurt you.. parents know what's best for their kids.

if communicating with them didn't work, find a friend to talk with.

Define the situation,
Don't let the situation define you.

I know you are a strong person and you can surpass it all.

Have a good day

Gel

This is devastatingly relatable.

I think many of us have felt like giving in but the strength comes when we keep fighting even if it feels like a black hole, a dead end and that its doing round and around in a vicious circle.

You words though simple are intense and very fitting.

All the best, Em