Comments : Selfish

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I guess there is a little bit of selfishness in each one of us and sometimes that selfishness is also possessiveness so both go hand in hand. A little dialogue type of poetry...good job :)

    I can't say much about other

    ^^maybe if you add an extra word here : can't say much about the other...will sound better.

    but real i am

    ^^Capitalize the i and add a y will also sound better for instance: but really I am

  • 7 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Thanks meena

    Yes meena u r right. I can write here more, but I just don't want to explain here any think.
    Just telling my truth.

  • 7 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I can't say much about other = "I can't say much about another"