Comments : Giving myself away

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ah tht freedom, seldom, I inquire. But no, no, no. I thought it was like that

    but then, no, no, no...

    Jesus!

    What is that?

    I must be going now.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Magi, a very unique and meaningful poem for you. I can relate to this as I don't abide by any religion tbh..

    The only query I have with it is "this is confession" I feel it should be this is A confession.

    Great write, Em