Comments : Scared

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Naomi, a very dark piece. Got me on the edge of my seat love the subtle rhyming and the short, sharp sentences.

    "showdows" should be "shadows"

    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Em, Written at 4am.. So the spelling was a little off.. Edited :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maher

    That's kinda creepy, but good :)