Comments : Life and Her Game

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    A very powerful and insightful piece about life.
    Reminds me of a quote I read once.. Life is a stage and we are it's audience, or something on those lines.

    All the best Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Little Silver Pen

      Shakespeare? I heard that quote once.

      I think life is a woman who owns a big rpg game in which we are forced to play.

      Not everyone wins the game, but nobody loses the game either.

  • 7 years ago

    by John Doe

    I like the vision as well as portrayal of the vision in the write up. Great job. Keep writing!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    There are three judges: Time, Space, Nature, and Survival.

    ^^ Quick Question, why are you introducing us readers to three judges but you are showing us Four within the same sentence?

    "However, what you learn is what really counts.
    If you learn Power, Freedom, and Justice, you have earned the most powerful Mounts."

    ^This is what came to mind as I read that line:
    I rather learn about love than what today's people consider "power" to be, which is usually focused on force, feelings of being superior than others, and extreme control.

    Other than that, I think I don't have anything else to add to this piece. My comment is just a comment, I don't mena to sound like I'm criticizing. I enjoyed the read. Keep Writing.