Comments : Flowing Stream (a Haiku)

  • 9 years ago

    by hiraeth

    I like this poem, although I should mention that the second line has an extra syllable, typical haikus follow the 5/7/5 syllable format.

    "flowing towards a crystal lake
    flow-ing to-wards a crys-tal lake <- I counted 8

    maybe you can try "flowing to a crystal lake".

    Enjoyed this! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Great little Haiku. Milly x

  • 9 years ago

    by ether

    A quaint haiku. i enjoyed it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Well done on this haiku.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Love this. I love haikus.