Comments : Former Places

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is downright the most saddest and yet the most beautiful poem I have read to date! Just breathtaking!

  • 7 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is a masterpiece

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is just beautiful yet so sad, it actually brought a tear to my eye and gave me Goosebumps. I have read nothing like this before which is great because it's unique.

    My words are like jasmines,
    but not as pitiful,
    like capital cities,
    bu not as grand.
    ^^
    The only thing is I think there's a typo on the second but in this stanza.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    There is a sad beautiful tone to this poem. It has a hypnosis about it as metaphors are revealed and explained. There is much potential in the world and sadly most of it is never revealed. Sad indeed.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This is a sorrowful water color painting poem!

    Just breathtaking!! In all its beauty, its dripping with sorrow and yet the reader cant help but be filled with peace and comfort. I was just taken by this piece!