Comments : Forest Lullaby

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely piece of poetry with beautiful descriptive writing throughout. I particularly like your use of personification. A fascinating footnote at the end there, too.

    SL

  • 3 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    A lullaby write - you have managed to infuse a mellow and calm feel throughout.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! A beautiful write and fascinating tid bit of information about the secrets of trees. Well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations, a lovely educational write.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Congratulations on a well deserved win

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I went the link and read and its very interesting. To know that trees sleep too throughout the season. I also like the way you have penned this interesting fact. It makes the tree in my mind come alive...very well penned and Congrats on the Win!

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    There is nothing more elegant than "trees drooping", this poem peaks such volume, it reads like a lullaby and is truly breathtaking!

    A jaw dropping poem at its finest!
    The graceful tones and visual display is very, very pretty!