Comments : Close Sharp Eyes

  • 4 years ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Interesting world play, but to be honest, I'm not 100% sure of the subject you intended, though my imagination has filled in some holes so I had a story nonetheless.

    • 4 years ago

      by Ramon The SunStone Haupt

      Yeah definitly, thanks for the comment, I do not want to lead any of my readers to go astray with my work, but all in all the essence and art of poetry :) I'll try and be on point next time.