Comments : Sugar and spice

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    There must be something in the air! I've just read Michael's latest and now this, lol.

    What I love about your poetry is that you never fail to deliver in terms of description and imagery and they don't always follow any tried and trusted method: it can be free verse one minute, and then a rhyme's thrown in the next (like at the end, here)

    This is excellent.

    SL

    • 7 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Hehehe thank you SL :) aw that's so special, I was just messing around chasing a prompt I wasn't even really paying attention to detail but it seems it worked it's charm :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    as SL says, your poetry never fails to deliver. I think that is why all beginners like myself should try as many different forms, copy other styles until one day the writer discovers their own.

    A poem of guilty pleasures conjures up all kinds of imagery for me. Either literal of metaphorical, I don't mind, maybe a bit of both is the way to go?

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Hehe thanks Mike, hey beginner????? Stop talking nonsense you're a brilliant writer, you write far more than I do and have quite a unique penmanship yourself, please do not insult yourself by calling you a beginner!!!

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

      take care
      Hazel