Comments : Wings (Acrostic)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Amariah

    I have always been an advocate of the humble acrostic, simply because it is a much underused form. When done properly, they can be an absolute pleasure to read; this is one of those.
    Lovely work,


  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nicely executed acrostic. To me it was like a hundred tiny moths or fireflis being disturbed into the night air; offering luminous relief from the darkness.

    Well done.


  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot. You have put so much into one neat package. Well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Ramon The SunStone Haupt

    I like this, very good reminds me so much of nature which we tend not to take care of

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    What a beautiful done acrostic. The imagery is wonderful and it's such a pleasure to read time,and again.