Hello Naomi,

A lovely tight, rhymed poem about one of your favourite topics. The mention of honeycomb infuses an image of a bee following a flowers scent to its sweet nectar. In nature some flowers get what they want by taking it. I feel you're more of a venus fly trap than a rose.

Well done on another romantic write.

Take care,

Michael

...okay, but apart from that I was spot on!! Lol

I think I know what third base is and - as a youngster - I was always fairly happy with the idea of dashing for second. However, if third was achieved, all well and good...

SL

N, nicely done! Good rhyming, a story line that flows nicely. It's fun to think about those days when you end up dashing up the stairs or the couch, or many other places.....

Naomi, this is a really good piece. I like the short, racy lines because they set the scene for hearts racing and how things would,be heading to third base lol. Takes me back ;)

All the best, Em

Nice and simple, enjoyed it, well done. :)