Knock Knock

by Pisciym   Sep 8, 2016


Knock Knock
Deaths at the door
Reaching for my Hearts Core
Knock Knock
Taking my last beat
This moment will it be my last?
Knock Knock
Every second minute and hour of my past
Begins to rush but it didn't last
Before the death began to lust
Knock Knock
He grips my arm
Should I put up a fight?
Should I fuss?
Or cling desperatly to life
Knock Knock
He's claiming me
Knock Knock
I panic and fall
Knock Knock
One.....Two.....Three
I open my eyes
Death has gone
And I relize
It was only just a horrible dream

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  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Hello,

    I thought this was very good. I agree with Ben, it was wonderfully dark and hectic. Each 'Knock knock' felt more intense than the last.

    One suggestion, though - or maybe even just food for thought - what if it's not a dream?

    Regards,

    Bradley

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every piece you read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark and hectic write from you that left me gasping for breath, lol.

    Great stuff and welcome to the site,

    Ben

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