Comments : My soul lives on

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Naomi, what a saddening piece.

    First line typo though should be through.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Naomi-I'm torn apart. From the write standpoint itself-amazing! Such visuals on each line. From a personal side-I'm so sad! Hugs to you-

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    There's an amazing sense of freedom in just letting go...

    At least here you can explore 101 ways to do this in complete safety.

    Lovely format and good use of language.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Michael! :)

      I must admit ive been there done that with trying in real life to find an outlet. Poetry is one of the safest :)