Comments : I love You More Than Love (Anaphora form)

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very nice poem. Ate Gel..... I will comment later in little brief and also give you a suggestion. Till then take... 5/5 Ice creams.

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hello!

    You have used, 'I love you more than love.' Rather than that you could've used
    'I love you more than myself.' Because I think it is looking better than that. Rest of the lines are good with the relation of crush. In my view the last line is something that many lovers would like to hear my their partners. Ha! Ha! Ha! It is soft. -
    'Even you hurt me I don't mind.'

    And yes, let me remind you that I have found some errors in this write also. But still you have done a fantastic job. Gel

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Augustus B.,

      Nice to hear it from you. .Thanks for the suggestion. But I can't change it coz that's what I really meant.

      "I love you more than LOVE" I can't change love for anything else coz there's nothing in the dictionary that can perfectly define what's more than Love. The highest form of love is already God. . so I can't use it here, it will be out of line.
      hahaha but thanks to you. .If there's any error you found in here just tell me...suggestion and corrections make me grow better. ..very much appreciated.

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Not only in words that we speak
    I love you in truth and in deed.

    ^^

    A lovely couplet there, Gel.

    This is indeed a lovely poem but I guess it could be taken a little more darkly when we consider the idea of you putting up with anything from this person. Even being hurt.
    Love really is a powerful emotion, isn't it?

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Yes, it is Sir Ben... Love can break us or even make us... the most powerful feeling ever.

      thank you, Sir Ben

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    Love poems are always a favourite of mine. They are do relatable and so the connection between words and emotions are clear.

    Well done,

    Michael x

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks, Sir Michael..

      So Nice of you,thanks for reading and for the comment..

      TC
      Gel