Comments : Distant Dreams.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Jenni, this is absolutely stunning yet sad all the same because though you're in love with this person you can't show it completely and love is meant to be shown. I can relate to this.

    All the best, Em
    Ps hope someone nominates this as I'm all out

  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Jenni,

    Em's right this is stunning.. and the feelings came out effortlessly .

    I have just one suggestion in the last Stanza second line---->

    "I have a dream where wishes come true,
    and I can sleep safe (change safe into safely) in your arms as you"

    that's all. But this is a nice peace

    keep writing :)