Comments : For Trish #2

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just beautiful-your words always manage to blow me away-so well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Koan this is truly breathtaking and I want to feel this kind of love before I die. Morbid I know but you portray it so well.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Dang!! Now this is what love is about and this is how it should be penned! I can just hear you speak out these feelings...beautiful!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Alfred,

    This is a poem straight from the old school! A beautiful, heartfelt piece, with the power to make even the hardest lady swoon!

    Wonderful.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben