Comments : Paint on Me

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Gel,

    Lovely imagery here and beautifully laid out which makes the piece easy and pleasurable to read.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
    The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
    Bravo, word weaver, well done...
    ~Dean Kuch

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hello Mr. Dean,

      thanks for the comment and for reading this. .
      By the way congratulations for the win. .

      Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
    The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
    Bravo, word weaver, well done...
    ~Dean Kuch

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Gel, this is a delicate piece and so unique that it pulls me in from start to finish.

    Painted the world with someone is what I would like to do but I need to find that special someone.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very nicely constructed with the nice flow of love. This is a different kind of write. Lot's of imaginary hidden inside which I am very expert to explore.

    Nice work. I like the Author's footnote down there.