Hellon,

there is something kind of haunting about this write, I love its format and how it really accentuates the words and makes you absorb them. great word choices as always. melancholy but fantastic!

Hello,

Nice little piece. ..I like the layout. ....

well done
Gel

I love this piece. It's so sad but delicate

A beautiful and delicate little write, Hellon. Nice to see you back.

Ben

So beautiful, the visuals are stunning.

Hi Hellon,

This feels as a metaphor for the elusiveness of life. You can and need to take in as much of you can of all the beauty, love and happiness to be had, but you can never truly hold on to it, as nothing lasts forever.

Well done!

Ingrid