Comments : A Snowflake

  • 6 years ago

    by Naughtymouse


    there is something kind of haunting about this write, I love its format and how it really accentuates the words and makes you absorb them. great word choices as always. melancholy but fantastic!

  • 6 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist


    Nice little piece. ..I like the layout. ....

    well done

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I love this piece. It's so sad but delicate

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautiful and delicate little write, Hellon. Nice to see you back.


  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    So beautiful, the visuals are stunning.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Hellon,

    This feels as a metaphor for the elusiveness of life. You can and need to take in as much of you can of all the beauty, love and happiness to be had, but you can never truly hold on to it, as nothing lasts forever.

    Well done!