Comments : Powerful and Dominant ( The Blitz)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    Now this is something different from you. A short trailing series of couplets. The last word leading onto the next. For me this gave your poem a refrained quality; almost musical.

    The content is full of wisdom and in places, nonsical fun. Lol

    Well done, Gel.

    Take care,

    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Gel, I read this before and upon reading it again I feel there are so many things I could talk about. As Michael said there are many words of wisdom and advice within this piece than we could all possibly take something from. I do like the short sharp couplets which lead onto the next and I tried this form when you first posted this piece and gave it up as a bad job lol though thanks for posting because it must have had much thought behind it.

    All the best, Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hugs.... thank you Em...You can do better than this..actually, this is just a repost after Lucero told me to change the title..well I love that girl. but don't get Jealous hhahaha lol I like you more...

      Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very nice life poem for lifting high the readers' soul.

    I like this one, it's very powerful.

    Knowledge is dangerous
    Knowledge is power

    Nice work.

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Augustus,

      Did you finish your homework before going to the site? lol kidding...thanks for reading this brother..
      :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Haha Gel, don't make me jealous now. My eyes are already turning green haha :p stomps up and down like a frenzied child lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Oh, Yes... Ate Gel. I have done it and I don't want the teacher say to me "Get out of the class." HA! ha! ha! Ha! Ha!