Awwww what happened? is the floor OK? oh I mean are you OK? lol. . Nice personal piece .. I don't want to laugh but excuse me ..I can't resist. .. lol
I can imagine the people talking after she left...

well done

Gel

Michael this is a great write I think there are a few interpretations of this piece and my first thought was that a pass by had come past flaunting her stuff (you probably know the ones lol) and mouths dropped open leaving beef Bourguignon dripping out that mouth of yours but then I read it again and thought hmm maybe they have been bickering and your lady friend legged it elegantly lol... I love the imagery by the way. I must have read it many times now because all my thoughts about to are jumbled, all good might I add.

1: I like how you started with and because it's like the reader is still left flummoxed because this last friend has up ans left you all alone.. I guess you'll have to get the bill lol.

2: I love this, the imagery is fantastic. The trailing steam is fabulous and .. She is obviously p****d with you, what did you do lol.

3: Reminds me of the Kenny rogers song ruby lol just that slamming left a shattering in my heart.

4: Close your mouth Michael the trains coming lol oh ans wipe your mouth. ;)

A very telling tale. Em

Thank you ladies. We men bring these situations on ourselves. Lol

Ouch Michael, what did you do? Very nicely done, I love your desciptives and describing the fellow patrons as a school of fish, brilliant! Well done-

Hi Michael,

Lovely lay out :-)

Some women are really good at this, sometimes deserved, but oftentimes a bit over the top on their part. It is all in the game, eh?

Well done, love these 'sketches of Life"

(((hugs))) xx Ingrid

Hello!

I like the writing style of this theme. It really becomes hard to deal with such situations when ladies do this kind of act. I mean to say all people of the restaurant started to stare very unusually at you. Nice write.