Michael this is absolutely beautiful. The words you use are so authentic and majestic. That is all.

Em

Michael,

Thank you. :)

Wonderful, flowing work.

Woo oohhh..Sir Michael the layout is so cute... and the content was lovely..

I like the lapping tide of love.
you have a good Imagination sir, nice Imaginary...

Gel

Wow, and....wow!

What an excellent poem, Michael!! So romantic and so well thought out.

Moonlight sails across
Your flowing feminine frame
Like a lapping tide of love.

^^^
This has such a strong connotation of secure and everlasting commitment, very deep sentiments portrayed here...

These eyes feel your pulse,
beating iambic rhythm,
singing an endless sonnet.

^^^
When in love, the normal things become magical, like the heart of the other beating.

This is the kind of verse that should be read out loud at a wedding, so beautifully done :-)

(((hugs))) xx Ingrid

Beautiful and romantic ^_^ You captured a moment, here. I like this!

5/5

Michael, what a beautiful love poems! It flows so smoothly.