First Date

by Savannah   Nov 10, 2016


Sometimes when I look at myself
and I look into my eyes,
I notice the way I think about that day with a smile,
Those curved lips I just can't disguise.
But I think it's him making my life worthwhile.
Why is it so hard for me to decide?
His affection or
all his attention?
I'm not too fond of falling over,
I really hate being alone
But I just think back to that day
And I'm happy once again

(Song lyrics I am currently working on)

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Savannah, wonderful song lyrics. It's really coming together nicely.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Savannah,

    Keep working on those lyrics as this is an excellent start. I like the line 'I'm not too fond of falling over'.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Savannah

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.

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