Very well done. I like the layout, the wonderful rhyme and the couplets that bookend the poem so well.

As for the message. It's easy to become lost and lonesome in a world full of crowds and easily captured memories.

Well done,

Michael

Thanks a lot for your comment. Yes, modern world is full of emotions expanding your sense of loneliness. My own result is this short poem.

Very good rhyming here with a fab message.
Em

I like this compo, the rhymes are unforced and vivid message .......

Well done as Mr. Darcy said. ..

Gel