I really enjoyed this. Love is what we make it... Nothing should limit love.

Em

This is just lovely! There's nothing like the first bloom of love. So beautiful how you describe this feeling with such delicate words. Well done-

Like the ladies just commented on this, it's beautiful. .. I like how you describe LOVE

It's the fire in the flame,
The blue and white hidden amidst bright orange,
It's the space between sky and water,
The line we are almost never able to reach.
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For me this stanza stand out

Love make all things beautiful. .

I love it
Gel

Wow. The ending is so good. Amazing piece. Thank you :)

I was completely amazed by this. This is such a lovely and delicate piece. This is just beautiful.