Comments : Love Not Gone

  • 3 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like this poem, your meter is great and I love your word choice in this piece, a sad but beautiful write filling the reader full of questions and self reflections, i'm glad I fell onto your profile. Great job!

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack Nightengale

      Thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Jack,

    This really is a chilling/haunting piece of poetry from you that kept me gripped until the end.
    Tinged with a dreadful sadness throughout, but that is coupled with real hope at the end.
    Those we love are, after all, 'never really gone'.

    All the best - I hope you are well,

    Ben

  • 3 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    This poem reminds me of the legend of the Lady in White. The chill and iciness could be felt from within. Lovely.