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by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
I like this double form poem... so refreshing it's like saying that today is a new beginning. I love it.
by - Mr. Darcy
I like these dual formed poems. I have tried a few myself as they add an extra challenging element. More a Haiku /Acrostic, perhaps?
The overall message of waking up to a new day with fresh possibilities following the grief of the previous one is appealing.
I have just one suggestion if I may. Using the word 'day' in the title and poem detracts slightly to my mind. If you were to use the imagery of a sunrise this would achieve the same outcome.
Anew, bringing fresh chances
Your grief left behind
Also formatting the text to the left shows off the acrostic.
Either way this is a good poem that creates the intended optimistic emotions.