Comments : As I hope like a candle light in the dark

  • 9 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Beautiful. You have a way with words. Take care.

    • 9 years ago

      by Adewole

      Thanks for your kind words, it touches my heart.

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Let my soul heal your pain and my love feed your hope
    If you cry then let it be the tears of joy, that I may kiss it away as a prize engraved in thy heart
    Let me scream out thy silence voice, the truth in thy eyes and the pain you carry inside thy heart

    ^^^
    love this lines...your love for this person shines in this few line...
    teary eyed ..thanks for sharing.

    Gel

    • 9 years ago

      by Adewole

      Thanks for your advice and understanding

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is... wow.
    The emotion in this piece is so strong.
    Yes, you can definitely tell how much you love this person.

    • 9 years ago

      by Adewole

      Sometimes when I write, I imagine if I was the one that actually wrote these words.

      Lone Wolf, you don't have to been in love before you could tell a tale of life but nothing can work without love, even if it is little. It's ripples effects are endless

  • 9 years ago

    by Greeter

    The emotion.

    The words sweep me to shores of love
    And splash me with imagination

    This is a moving write.

    Keep writing