Silence in Ghostly Dissray

by Davie J Swan   Dec 11, 2016


Take flight like stale breath,
depart
Return ye not, until pang's echo
roars!
In ghostly disarray, forever
entwined
Your silence speaks not for your
heart
But your heart dost speak your
mind

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  • 8 years ago

    by Greeter

    Welcome to Poems and Quotes

    what an interesting write. Specially the last two sentences:

    Your silence speaks not for your heart
    But your heart speaks your mind

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Davie, they are right, you know. Your little gem here is formatted well and makes the reader think.

    I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

    Welcome to our humble home. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Welcome to P&Q and what a fantastic opening piece. So much imagery within it and will receive my nomination as soon as I can.
    Well done, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hi Davie and welcome to pnq.....I have to say that's some piece to open with too, I think you're gonna fit in just fine!

    I love the feel of your poem, really nice format and word usage and I like the voice within it, really nice to see some olde worlde language there are a few of us that dabble from time to time.

    5/5 great job.

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