Cruising in Deep Waters

by Firenrain   Dec 14, 2016


Love hold on tight we are cruising in deep waters ,
It shouldn't give you a fright ,
No no don't cry you will break my heart in two,
Love hold on tight like true lovers do.

Love , Let me remind you there are rainbows after the rain ,
Let me tell you the roaring storm will seize and so will the pain .
Let's hold on to each other when the high tides roll in ,
When the ship is tossed at sea like a paper boat in the falling rain.

We will cling together when the sea rumbles and thunder falls ,
We will cling together until the last call .
Don't fear or let the storm scare you away,
our love is the anchor when it thunders and rains .

Have faith, say a little prayer .
The mighty storm will seize and the sun will shine again .
When the sun shines bright and the sea is calm ,
Hold on tightly to me love.
We just discovered an island of love .
We anchor our ship and smile at the sun.
Walk hand in hand like it never happened to us.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Welcome to pnq! This is a great first poem I'm a fan of mostly dark, nature or love poetry and this is a great example, nice flow and imagery and very emotional without feeling forced.

    Good job!

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much Ben. I am happy you liked the poem and I hope to get better. Thank you for the welcome. Hope to share and learn . Cheers !

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely stunning. Well done and welcome to P&Q

    • 7 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much my first poem I was nervous . Thank you for the encouraging words and the welcome.

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is absolutely beautiful! I love the feeling of hope it gives off! Well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Firenrain

      Thank you so much for the encouraging words . It's my first poem and it's lovely to get such a positive response . Thank you