Comments : Anything for a bed (acrostic)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is powerful stuff.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, I am without words...I agree with Em, this is powerful stuff.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi,

    I see you're turning out a few xmas acrostics and they are a good deal darker than your club competition one!

    Well done on this,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Benny. Michael challenged me and I accepted. These are those results.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Naomi, this is both shocking and horrific. Many people, myself included want to think that this time of year is devoid of negative conitations. Here we have that dispelled in a very image driven way.

    Well done, a very good write.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you.
      And thank you for the challenege! Maybe i shall go and challenge someone else!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Yes, pass on the challenges. :) x

    Hope you're well.