It sounds musically.

Really enjoyed reading this. Simple yet tells a good story.
It's really hard to do something like this and keep on track and not lose flow. (I've tried)

You sir, have done this perfectly.

Michael,

These are not easy and this really is a joy to read.

All the best,

Ben

Michael, wow what an amazing write! I have never seen this style of poetry, it's very unique. Well done Sir-

What a joyful read dear loved it