Comments : Crossland (Villanelle)

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    It sounds musically.

  • 7 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Really enjoyed reading this. Simple yet tells a good story.
    It's really hard to do something like this and keep on track and not lose flow. (I've tried)

    You sir, have done this perfectly.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard


    These are not easy and this really is a joy to read.

    All the best,


  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wow what an amazing write! I have never seen this style of poetry, it's very unique. Well done Sir-

  • 6 years ago

    by Khadz

    What a joyful read dear loved it