Fantastic Andrea.

Hello dear,

reading this out loud was like watching an old video recording - B&W perhaps, of you as a little girl running around the old farm. Your milky moustache and the verbal cattle. Heck, I could even smell them. lol

All the best, Andrea. xx

Andrea, such loving memories. It brought wonderful memories for me too. My Aunt & Uncle had a farm in North Dakota that we would visit when we were kids. Your words brought that home-just lovely!

Love this, love the imagery and word choice, you ticked all the blah blah blahs on this one syrup!!!

I don't why but this reminds me of a poem by the Fisherman, the one with the fields and thunder and rain.....I know it's nothing like that poem but it reminds me of it for some reason.

I like the visual, the reader can see what's happening within this piece... I read this while listening to Taylor S. country song...

Its like I'm in this poem..I like it

Well done as always

Gel