This really is a very well written piece of poetry that - although sad throughout - was a real pleasure to read.

All the best,

Ben

I liked this very much. Releasing our sadness this way really helps.

Thanks for sharing.

I really thought I had commented on this but obviously not. It was superbly done with fabulous rhyming and a beautifully written yet sad story.

Well done on the win.
Em

This is a very sentimental write for it holds much more for you then what the readers read. I like the flow and the way your feelings unfold with memories and then just like that without even saying sadness is floating there waiting to be known...nicely penned my friend.

Congrats on the Win

Well deserved!!!! Congratulations!!!! Truly heartfelt.

Very well composed... Keep writing

A write overflowing with love, expressed so beautifully it touched me.