Gel, this is just lovely, ahhhh, nothing like love...well done-

Gel, here is yet another sweet love poem by you that is so relatable to many of us here..

1/ This is a beautiful opening and shows I feel that this person makes you glow with love even in dark times which to me is a wonderful thing.

2/ I absolutely love this as it shows he believes in you even if you don' And that he wanted your lo e regardless or so I think.

3/ Aww, I imagine you walking with your head on you lover shoulders with your arms wrapped around each other, sweet.

4/ Oh, why did you let the cat out the bag, sure I will pretend to be your lover for one night haha. ;) joking aside this is a lovely sentiment because as long as you can spend one night with this person nothing else would matter because of your love for them.

5/ Love this.. Maybe to make it flow a little better you could write 'and watch for the moon to reflect'

6/ This is a little sad but I can imagine you not taking your eyes off him incase it was the last time you saw him..

7/ I don't know why this made me chuckle just imagining him smelling of chocolate but I guess you mean his sweet scent, cute.

8/ love the imagery here of your heart singing of the love for them, a simple symphony.

9/ What a beautiful ending.. No one else will know you or where you are I am guessing which means no one can stop you loving each other.

All the best Gel.
Em

Good nice thought

Good nice thought

First two lines -

The whole world knows that Sun is the main source of light. And I think it's great honour that you are giving great respect to your love.

Hey, Wait a minute...hmm.... I mean this is brilliant. Your every new love poems coming top of each other. I see a great power and respect of love. It's just like romantic tale. I don't have much words to describe the glory of this grand poem. Hope you will handle after this.

Great poem. I like every single lines of this write. Keep on flying.

Ok, yes I do remember ah.. Make sure that you take good landing if you are flying. lol... All the best..

Gel,

This is a lovely, soothing poem to read and the delicacy is added to by some clever half rhymes which keep the piece flowing nicely and prevents it sounding forced.
Again, beautifully laid out, too.

Well done and all the best,

Ben

Hey Gel,

It was the title of this piece that drew me to it and I have to say that I'm glad I read this....I don't want to sound like a patronising ass but your poetry has really improved massively, I really like the format of this, you word choice is excellent and rally memorable, as Ben.P stated, the half rhymes were really well thought out and keep the tempo of the poem flowing nicely!!

Great job!

Other Ben :)