Comments : In the air

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is powerful!!!

    Love, love, love this poem!!!!

    Holy moly Michael,
    You truley have written a gem today!

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, very deep, your visuals are spot on. Very cool write-well done!

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you for your lovely comments. They mean so much


  • 3 years ago

    by Ren

    Ditto to what Andrea

    This is excellent, Michael!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I like the darkness of this, it speaks of instincts and desires yet choices and suppression.

    It's what I love about poetry, it can be written as one thing but it means something else to another.

    Fantastic words

    • 3 years ago

      by Michael

      Yes the beauty of poetry is so amazing and powerful.

      Thank you