Inspired by the beautiful song all things lost.

I'll try find the artist shortly

This is yet another fine example of your talent as a poet, your rhyming is sublime.

1/ Sometimes life feels like this, like we have nowhere to go even if there's many paths to take but even if there's a map would we fully or truly follow it .

2/ I like this because you're walking the path (I think of life) and you're taking each step at a time because as you say it's not a race and I personally think we should take each day as it comes and not rush ahead of ourselves.

3/ I wonder what you're waiting for.. Love, inspiration or just some boost in life. Who knows? But I like the imagery of you sitting there 'on the brink' just thinking about things, clearing your head as we all need time to think over things.

4/ I hear you. We all want to find out who we are but will we ever fully know who we are.

5/ I like the itchy feet thing here like you're trying to get up and move but can't.

6/ I don't know why but this made me laugh but I know its meant to be serious and I agree we can't sit on our ass if we want to change things we have to do it ourselves.

7/ love the thought of stars pulling you back when you think you've lost your way. My favourite stanza.

8/ The most used words are "I'm okay" even if we're not.

Fantastic write, Em