Comments : The Fake Corpse

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very dark but extremely visual write that actually made me shiver in a couple of places.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      The scene is absolutely a horror to see. Yes, I did shiver at the thought.

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This can be read in many ways. Heavy bones that you cannot lift either from injury caused by someone deliberately or by accident or from symptoms of an auto immune condition. Either way it is an awful thing to experience