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Enjoyed the twist ending in this one. Just a suggestion though... Maybe don't use any numbers in your 2nd to last line... Unless the dichotomy was intentional.
by CJ Maleney
Glad you enjoyed, yeah it was intentional,
I have a habit of writing what I think as it comes. sometimes even if I realise it's grammatically incorrect, I'll still leave it in.
Unless it's a clear type error in which case I'll edit it.
by Beautiful Tragedy
I do enjoy the ending in this one. Reminds me of something I used to say to someone I love.
It is so interesting to deny numbers while embracing them. A good poet always make use of opposite, like this.
Ooh now I'm intrigued.
The problem with poets is they can say everything and reveal nothing.
Or say very little and reveal everything.
You have a great understanding of opposite in your poetry and that would come very handy in your writes.
I am so sorry I might have cliched the dislike box by mistake. You have to forgive me.
Big thumbs lol
I have come across many of your works, Craig but never upon a love themed one... Wow, man, I didn't know you are so very sweet. This poem is heart melting! I really like it. Added to favorites!
I can relate to this so much.