Comments : The Sum Of All My Fears

  • 8 years ago

    by Therapoetic4

    Enjoyed the twist ending in this one. Just a suggestion though... Maybe don't use any numbers in your 2nd to last line... Unless the dichotomy was intentional.

    • 8 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Glad you enjoyed, yeah it was intentional,

      I have a habit of writing what I think as it comes. sometimes even if I realise it's grammatically incorrect, I'll still leave it in.

      Unless it's a clear type error in which case I'll edit it.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    I do enjoy the ending in this one. Reminds me of something I used to say to someone I love.
    Great write.

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    It is so interesting to deny numbers while embracing them. A good poet always make use of opposite, like this.

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Ooh now I'm intrigued.

    The problem with poets is they can say everything and reveal nothing.

    Or say very little and reveal everything.

    Words dance

    • 8 years ago

      by ddavidd

      You have a great understanding of opposite in your poetry and that would come very handy in your writes.

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I am so sorry I might have cliched the dislike box by mistake. You have to forgive me.

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I have come across many of your works, Craig but never upon a love themed one... Wow, man, I didn't know you are so very sweet. This poem is heart melting! I really like it. Added to favorites!

  • 7 years ago

    by Reelo

    Lovely.
    I can relate to this so much.