A warm welcome to the site, Moya.

The emotional depth here and quality of writing is light years beyond your age and I for one look forward to reading more from you.

Take care

Just some friendly critique, if you don't mind:

- "harycane" should be "hurricane"
- "im" should be "I'm"
- "persone" should be "persone"

My biggest suggestion is to check your grammar here. It's great if you free write or let your thoughts just automatically speak, but I feel like you could make this piece stronger with more work and time on it. Re-read and take your time. You have clear emotions here but it's not coming across as effectively or clearly to the reader.