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by Ben Pickard
An excellent, visual write.
Well done on this,
I liked this a lot. Your visuals are spot on. It told a lot more than one story here,-well done-
by Poet on the Piano
I agree about the visuals, such engaging imagery!
My only suggestion or thought would be to possibly add or experiment with different punctuation instead of the commas. Like a dash, semicolon, etc.
Again, totally my opinion. Keep writing, will read more soon.