this is great, thanks for posting!

this is great, thanks for posting!

We are a blink in the eye of time, here as keepers.
Lets hope when we become extinct there is something left worth leaving.
Nice write ether
PPx

Really well done-a lot of food for thought on what really is important in this life.

A powerful piece that is a real slap in the face.

Take care,

Ben

Incredibly raw and powerful and filled with a very haunting truth. Well done!

Congrats on the win! :)

Breathtakingly good

Interestingly captivating and excellently penned! Liked the
images that comes to the mind as I kept reading it..well done!
Congrats on the win!

Judging comment

A powerful poem of two parts. The first two stanza’s are quite bare and gritty and in your face, whereas the last softer and more personal, this adds immensely to the flavour of the piece. We have certainly transformed this planet to one of chaos, is there a glimmer of hope within your last stanza? I would like to think so… maybe not /…Great title, a really thought provoking read.